Thursday, 25 April 2013

Bob Vila 4 old school crime chapter 1

chapter 1

Fairview

20 miles south of Seacrest is the town of Fairview. Fairview is a town like any other. It has houses, shops and a police force but there is one building that's more important than any of the others. The bank. Inside the bank of Fairview was a total of 50,000,000 and anyone would do anything to get their hands on it.

Behind the bank, next to the back entrance, two men in their early 30's were waiting for the right moment. Now, you may be thinking that they were bank workers who had just nipped round the back for a quick cigarette but no. These were two of SPIDER'S best bank robbers and out of 70 jobs none of them had failed and this one wouldn't either.

11 A:M. Now was the agreed time. They both put on balaclava's then one of the men kicked down the door as if it was paper and ended up behind the desks with the glass windows. The two of them split up. One of them went to find the nearest safe while the other would deal with the public. The one who stayed behind pulled out a black Magnum 357 and shot at the glass one one of the desks." Nobody move, this is a heist!" The man shouted at the top of his voice. Meanwhile, the other man had found a safe with a whopping $200,000 inside it. Once he had came up from the underground store room where all the safe's were kept, the man with the gun shot at the glass door shattering it instantly offering the perfect escape route. As soon as the two of them ran out of the front entrance the alarm sounded. Outside the bank a black 2010 4 door Maserati quattroporte GTS was pulling up out side the doors. The two men ran down the steps and got into the Maserati with the safe between them." Drive" one of the men said. The driver didn't need telling twice. He put his foot down and sped away as 5 Fairview police cruisers stopped in front of the bank. The cops piled out and started shooting at the Maserati. One sharp shooter managed to hit the registration plate which was a vital clue but as soon as it left the car it fell down the drain." Hold fire!" The police commander shouted. He pulled a radio off his belt and talked into it." Hello. this is Chief Martin of the F.P.D. Yes. That's right." He went on." We need Bob Vila."   

Thursday, 4 April 2013

Bob Vila 4 preview

Sup readers! So red water has finally finished and it was the longest story yet.  I started it on the 7th of December and finished in March! Anyway, the next story will be back to  business as usual with a bank raid, a very unexpected ending and some history into Bob's life. One question, what do you think of Molly? Tall, slim with long dark hair and a great personality. Just to keep you guessing, the end of the next story involves Molly. A LOT! Onward to Bob Vila 4: Old school crime!   


Bob's Camaro, this is what he uses next. He still owns all the other cars i have used in past story's. They are all in the garage at home. It's like the one from transformers. but red and with less robot. 


I Don't know why, but in my mind, Molly looks a lot like Megan Fox. For those of you who don't know who that it. It's the girl from transformers. Why has this became a very transformers related post? I haven't got a clue.

Wednesday, 3 April 2013

Bob Vila 3 RED WATER chapter 7

chapter 7

Valiant

Bob managed to moor the boat next to one of the huge concrete pillars that had been buried in the seabed to stop the oil platform from floating away. Molly walked over to a ladder that had been built in to the side of the pillar the boat was next to followed closely by Bob. When they reached the deck they took in their surroundings to try and find out where David could be. To his left Bob could see a large tank that was full of some liquid. Bob didn't know what it was but considering it  had "highly flammable" written on it, he didn't really want to know. The weather was making everything seem more spooky. There was no wind under the black sky and the moon was shining bright. Over on the far side of the rig was a Helipad with the Chinook on top of it. Suddenly there was a voice behind them. " You made it this far Bob, but at the end of this you'll be sleeping with the fish.-Literally." Someone said behind them. When they turned round they saw none than David standing there with both his guards." I'll make sure everyone knows what a valiant effort you made." David said with a cruel smile on his face. Bob saw David's hand go inside his suit jacket and knew what was about to happen. 
David pulled a desert eagle (The gun not the bird) out of his jacket and at that same moment Bob whipped out his fp9. Both of them fired but Bob fired first.

The bullet hit David's gun with such force it caused David to fire the wrong direction. David's bullet was flying towards the tank of highly flammable liquid. Bob guessed what was about to happen and done the first thing that came into his head. He pushed Molly off the oil rig! Bob jumped off strait after
Molly and 5 seconds after the tank exploded engulfing the whole deck of the rig in flames. Molly hit the deck of the lucky day covered in dirt but other than that, she was fine. Just as she got up and started dusting herself off Bob landed and fell right on top of her. " Sorry about that." Bob said to her as they  both got up. The explosion had killed David and the two guards along with 3 workers. As the two of them climbed up the ladder to sail back to Fraserburgh
they were trying to thing of a cover up for operation:RED WATER.


THE END